Comments on: Need Your Input on a T-shirt Design

By: John Brown

John Brown — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 15:35:33 +0000

Ha, good ones!

By: erellsworth

erellsworth — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 20:10:28 +0000

How about a sub-header/back that says, “Where did my day go?”

By: bdayton

bdayton — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 08:35:55 +0000

Servant of a Dark God: Wrangling Humans since 2009

Yeah, terrible, I know, but I had to try.

By: John Brown

John Brown — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 20:35:54 +0000

lol

Good one. Glad you found the conference stuff useful!

By: Janiel

Janiel — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 09:33:22 +0000

How about:
Servant of a Dark God — It’s what’s for dinner.

BTW, heard you at a writer’s conference last spring. Terrific job and extremely helpful.

By: John Brown

John Brown — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 15:56:42 +0000

Good comments

By: amylamborn

amylamborn — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 02:33:39 +0000

I like the idea of a T-shirt. My suggestion would be to put the title either on the front or back with “we are cattle” on the opposite. It will make people ask “what’s your shirt about” and be advertising for your book.
I share the concern about being a servant of a dark god. But I really think people will ask what it means (especially here in Utah) lol

By: Kirahfaye

Kirahfaye — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 20:57:33 +0000

How about putting either the title or the “subtitle” extension on the back? Or will using both sides raise the price of the T-shirt?

Oh, and here are a couple more suggestions for the subtitle – “We are Cattle” or “Feed Your Hunger”